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Shot this yesterday when I was on a shoot with none other than :iconloganb44: The person in the shot is Allison. She seems to be in a lot of my stuff. That's just because she's incredible.

Anyway, I cant think of a title for this.

© 2009 Yokie Bertos
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:iconloganb44:
Wow I really like this photograph. Man were the shadows on her face hard to combat against in the brilliance of the all mighty sun.
I must say that the composition is great. The way that the image is cropped in so tightly is very appealing to me.
I like how her eyes are looking off somewhere in the distance I presume.
The lighting on her face and the whole image is spot on in my opinion. If she had been looking at the camera I think this would have been an excellent senior Photograph example for the web site. Still really outstanding though.
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:iconritterrunkel:
She really is. Fine model but the frame takes a lot of depth and seriousness. I don't like it - it simply looks like a bauble in my eyes.
:iconwendieee:
allison is gorgeous.. i'm jealous. But anyway this is a lovely image. I wish I still had a camera :/

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We'll let our heartbeat guide us through the dark. Just trust me. -- Tokio Hotel (1000 Oceans)
:iconyokie44:
oh! I just had an idea!! If you got a Vivitar camera body, like maybe on older one for like 20 or 50 dollars, steph totally has a ton of lenses, and a dark room... =]

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Remember, always look BOTH ways before crossing the street!
:iconwendieee:
that would be super cool.. you'd have to show me how to use the dark room :] I've never actually done it.. just watched you :P

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We'll let our heartbeat guide us through the dark. Just trust me. -- Tokio Hotel (1000 Oceans)
:iconyokie44:
It's totally not that complicated.. omg, yeah, i can soo show you were to get a good film slr for cheap. This is exciting to me...

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:iconyokie44:
I agree about the borders. I generally like them, but i made a mistake in resizing the image, so i inadvertently gave it a thinly useless and obnoxious border... blech!

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Remember, always look BOTH ways before crossing the street!
:iconstephjones008:
sure get her one before you get me one :p jk nice pic. Alison is the exception to the reason of why I don't enjoy taking pictures of people in anything but black and white. The reason being that she's gorgeous. I have never seen a bad picture of her. Of course the only ones I've seen are ones that you and Logan have taken so that should be saying something if you catch my drift... ;)
:iconwendieee:
this shall be our summer project! :]

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We'll let our heartbeat guide us through the dark. Just trust me. -- Tokio Hotel (1000 Oceans)
:iconsimplemajik:
I really like this pic..The way her eyes match the trees in the backround is pretty amazing, and the necklace i think pulls it all together.very pretty...makes me wish i was a redhead.:D

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May 11, 2009, 2:57:49 PM

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